Good bye forever

The and is near the end is near

well last full day at primary school

and what I want is a great time with my best friends

I have made a presentation

Good Bye

Posting comments

Hi Every one,

I know that I have not made a post in a while 

but today we were required to do a post and a comment.

So today i visited a blog whose owner was called Surfing  Dolphin .

He had recently made a post about Morse code and t was quite interesting.

I made a comment about it  Can you give me feed back about how good my blog commenting is thank you

 here is the post... Than you

South Africa RWC

Hi,Hows it going

Today my class was randomly picked to do DLOs on random Rugby World Cup teams

I ended up geting South africa (although i like England more but don't tell anyone)

Go South Africa (But really England)

Here is the link for it right here

Thanks

Te Reo Maori conversation with Hati and Nikolai

This is a QR(Quick Response) code. 

Hati,Nikolai and I have recorded ourselfes speacking in maori

this was a fun activity but required effort.

if you have a mobile device that has a QR code scanner

scan now.

The Viewer :Should Tristan...

Hi 

today in class we did a Conscious alley 

it is a drama technique

Should Tristan look through the machine again.

Enjoy.

Tristans restless sleep

Hello

this is Hati and my image of Tristans restless sleep

my friend hati is in this image the  shadow of his windocell and the cresent moon on his bed and face.

And also there is a scentence from the book on the image.We have made a soundscape for this image.The book is written by 

Gary crew shawn tan

Enjoy

That was camp

Hello
hay park classes 8 and 7 we had a lot of fun
but unfortunately we had to leave after three days.
me and my class mates have each written a poem.
here is mine.

That Was Camp.

Remember the excitement flowing through the bus as though it was a fire?

Remember the arrows flying and the balloon popping suddenly?

That was camp.

Remember the slyness of the rain creeping in on us every day?

Remember when I caught that baby wave and faceplanting countless times?

That was camp.

Remember how we stayed up all night and talked?

Do you remember when we went home all the energy gone us ready to and see our families again?

That was camp.

4/6/2015 JEB speedwrite:Stars a mystery of the universe

NAME:Johan DATE: 4/6/2015

SPEEDWRITE: INFORMATION REPORT ON STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

Stars of mystery of the universe

[Introduction]

Stars,if you want to know how they're born how they live and what happens to them when they die.You'll enjoy and I hope this encourages you to make your own explanation everyone

What are stars made of.

Stars are made with a mixture of hydrogen and helium this would usually caused nuclear fusion because of the extreme gravitational pressure on the star . On the inside of a star hydrogen and helium smash into each other this causes nuclear fusion . As a side effect of this we get heat and light although this is a good thing we also get solar radiation that can cause skin cancer that would greatly affect the human races numbers .

[the life cycle of a star]

The life cycle of stars very complex. The birth of a star goes exactly like the proceeding, helium hydrogen and dust come together and create a gravitational pull then what happens is the hydrogen and helium bash into each other creating solar radiation in other words nuclear fusion side effect as we already know is light,heat and the bad side effect is that it can cause skin cancer.After that after that the star could live up to 100 billion years before it's inevitable death this is called a Nova or for a larger star super nova  

[ types of stars ]

There different types of stars the differences are colors shapes and sizes for instance colors are most obvious for a blue star is always the hottest and oldest for a blue flame is the point where metal melts . A red star is a cold a star and they have found that some stars are the body heat of a human which is about 30 to 40 degrees Fahrenheit strange isn't it. Although a star like our Sun which is a yellowish orange is a medium star and is by far the largest object in our solar system

[Conclusion]

Stars are strange and we need to use that power( I got that power!) . Stars could be different from us they usually are there actually probably one way that they could be the same but temperature but that's not very often can we do to make big stars like usstars of the great mysteries of the universe

MARS THE DEAD PLANET

MARS THE DEAD PLANET

In Week 5 of Term 2 our class focussed on how to write great information reports.

We wrote about the planet Mars as we are in the middle of learning about Planet Earth and Beyond. Learning how to write a great information report will help us with our self-guided topics in a few weeks time.

Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

Did you notice the planet mars? it is earth’s neighbours and is surprisingly different and Named after the roman god of war. if you want to know more,like why mars is red or how old you would be on mars read on.

visual surface

Mars has a very strange surface and is filled with crazy things.Mars is red that seems simple right,nope its surface actually has a mineral the name of which is iron oxide.The red planet has a thin atmosphere which is letting too much sun light in scorching the barren wasteland.covering most of the planet Sand Storms can rage lasting for months

Mars also has one gem in all the volcanoes,sand storms and canyons it has mount olympus(or olympus mons) the largest volcano known to man.But the planet has two ice poles like earth.

14/05/15

My Reflection: (e.g. what I learnt, what I thought about my work, what helped me improve.. the thing that made me improve the most is that i wrote faster but the problem was that it was hard to find “inspiration” and the topic was about some thing I know little about.

Human exploration

mars has never been explored with a real human,it has only been explored with drones or satellites.

The Orbit of Mars

Even though Mars is our closest neighbour, its orbit is very different. A Martian day (or how long it takes to rotate once on its axis) is longer than an Earth day and equals 24 hours and 37 minutes. This is because it spins slower than our planet. Moreover, a year on Mars is the same as 687 Earth days! Imagine if you lived on Mars, you would be almost half the age you were on Earth!

(Shared writing with teacher and group 19/05/15)

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs:
have sub-headings where helpful
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found